Individualized Error

To better adapt my writing style and abilities to what is expected of a college student, I have spent a lot of time and focus on changing my language to be more succinct. When doing so, I have been paying more attention to my word choice (as can be seen in the above sample), as well as my grammar. I have been using less complex sentences if not necessary. Shortening my sentences has force my language to be clearer and less unnecessary (or else I ramble). This should help me as I continue on the pre-med track. Because, although I am sure my professors would love reading ten page lab reports, it is frowned upon to use any flowery language in science.